When you're writing a story, if you really want your reader to get how your character is feeling, show them.
Tell the look he or she had on their face when an important event happened. Did his mouth drop when something shocking happened? Did he smile shyly when he got a compliment?
Describe their body language to show how your character reacts to the thing that happened. Did she jump up and down? Did she stomp out of the room?
Finally, describe how your character's voice sounded when he or she said something in response to an important event. Did he whisper gently or shout at the top of his lungs?
Tell the look he or she had on their face when an important event happened. Did his mouth drop when something shocking happened? Did he smile shyly when he got a compliment?
Describe their body language to show how your character reacts to the thing that happened. Did she jump up and down? Did she stomp out of the room?
Finally, describe how your character's voice sounded when he or she said something in response to an important event. Did he whisper gently or shout at the top of his lungs?
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